30 0 1 -1 0 1 false 1 true ShowOnce 0 2 false 1 true ShowOnce 0 3 false 1 true ShowOnce 0 4 false 1 true ShowOnce 0 5 false 1 true ShowOnce 0 29 false 1 true ShowOnce 0 19 false 1 true ShowOnce 0 16 false 1 true ShowOnce And false false false false Normal None 0 Conversation 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 1 JS - In general, Vesgel appears too meek to be a high ranking wizard of Glasvahl's crew. Perhaps re-orienting her to appear more menacing would prove too much work, though. In that case, small changes would help - suggestions follow. 1 -1 1 6 false 1 true ShowOnce 1 11 false 1 true ShowOnce 1 7 false 1 true ShowOnce 1 12 false 1 true ShowOnce 1 20 false 1 true ShowOnce 1 8 false 1 true ShowOnce And Boolean IsGlobalValue(String, Operator, Int32) n_Vesgel_State EqualTo 0 false And Void SetGlobalValue(String, Int32) n_Vesgel_State 1 false false false false Normal None 0 Conversation 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 2 JS - Off-limits sounds modern. Please, consider replacing. "As I said before, the inner halls are forbidden, you should leave." for example, would convey the same while accentuating a hidden threat. 1 -1 2 6 true 1 true ShowOnce 2 11 true 1 true ShowOnce 2 7 true 1 true ShowOnce 2 12 true 1 true ShowOnce 2 20 true 1 true ShowOnce 2 8 true 1 true ShowOnce And Boolean IsGlobalValue(String, Operator, Int32) n_Vesgel_State EqualTo 1 false Or Boolean IsGlobalValue(String, Operator, Int32) n_Vesgel_State EqualTo 2 false And false false false false Normal None 0 Conversation 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 3 allowed the elves to enter the Frost-Hewn Breach: may not need this node if the elves disappear in a cutscene 1 -1 And Boolean IsGlobalValue(String, Operator, Int32) n_Vesgel_State EqualTo 3 false And false false false true Normal None 0 Bark 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 4 1 -1 And Boolean IsGlobalValue(String, Operator, Int32) n_Vesgel_State EqualTo 4 false And false false false true Normal None 0 Bark 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 5 1 -1 And Boolean IsGlobalValue(String, Operator, Int32) n_Vesgel_State EqualTo 5 false And false false false true Normal None 0 Bark 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 6 1 -1 6 10 false 1 true ShowOnce And Boolean IsGlobalValue(String, Operator, Int32) n_Rymrgand_Quest_Stage GreaterThan 1 false And Boolean IsGlobalValue(String, Operator, Int32) n_Rymrgand_Quest_Stage LessThan 3 false And Void SetGlobalValue(String, Int32) n_Vesgel_State 2 false false false false Normal MarkAsRead 0 Conversation 7 1 -1 7 28 false 1 true ShowOnce 7 15 false 1 true ShowOnce And false false false false Normal MarkAsRead 0 Conversation 8 1 -1 And Void AIPathToPoint(Guid, Guid, MovementType) 131431d5-558d-4530-9021-c6747ea3a7ab 9f1b5f48-02d2-48b3-a116-0e3e0cc33c8d Walk false false false false Normal MarkAsRead 0 Conversation 10 JS - The wording here makes it seem like the temple is like a museum under renovations. Vesgel should be much more direct. Anywhere past a locked door is forbidden, and only Rymrgand's faithful can walk those halls. 1 -1 10 26 false 1 true ShowOnce 10 19 true 1 true ShowOnce And false false false false Normal None 0 Conversation 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 11 1 -1 11 13 false 1 true ShowOnce And Boolean IsGlobalValue(String, Operator, Int32) n_Larha_Quest_Stage GreaterThan 1 false And Void SetGlobalValue(String, Int32) n_Vesgel_State 2 false false false false Normal MarkAsRead 0 Conversation 12 1 -1 12 14 false 1 true ShowOnce And false false false false Normal MarkAsRead 0 Conversation 13 JS - "feebly," just by itself, continues to make Vesgel appear non-threatening. Ideally, we'd change the adverb to reflect a danger lurking underneath her demeanor. 1 -1 13 19 true 1 true ShowOnce And false false false false Normal None 0 Conversation 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 14 JS - Here, Vesgel shouldn't dwell on the explanation, but flat-out tell you that the matter is sacred to Rymrgand, and that it's just a matter of time. Until then, get lost... or else. 1 -1 14 24 false 1 true ShowOnce 14 19 true 1 true ShowOnce And false false false false Normal None 0 Conversation 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 15 1 -1 15 17 false 1 true ShowOnce 15 19 true 1 true ShowOnce And false false false false Normal None 0 Conversation 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 16 JS - This reminds me, as in node 10, of the temple being akin to a museum. The concept of "Public," as in "Citizenry," does not well apply to Twin Elms' society - or to a cast of nomadic pale elves from the wastes of an icy tundra. 1 -1 And false false false true Normal None 0 Bark 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 17 1 -1 17 19 true 1 true ShowOnce And PlayFirst 18 18 1 17 And Boolean IsCompanionActiveInParty(Guid) b1a7e807-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 false And false false false false Normal OnceEver 0 Conversation 9c98d3f5-92f8-4926-9b49-3da82b3aab77 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 19 mid-conversation return node || JS - this one can pass as is if she's to be made more threatening. Still, a bit more of edge would be welcome. 1 -1 19 6 true 1 true ShowOnce 19 11 true 1 true ShowOnce 19 7 true 1 true ShowOnce 19 12 true 1 true ShowOnce 19 20 true 1 true ShowOnce 19 8 true 1 true ShowOnce And false true false false Normal None 0 Conversation 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 20 1 -1 20 21 false 1 true ShowOnce And false false false false Normal MarkAsRead 0 Conversation 21 JS - Her lack of spine and convinction could be again changed her simply by removing the "I think" that she appends to the end of her last sentence. 1 -1 21 22 false 1 true ShowOnce 21 19 true 1 true ShowOnce And false false false false Normal None 0 Conversation 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 22 1 -1 22 19 true 1 true ShowOnce And PlayFirst 23 23 1 22 And Boolean IsCompanionActiveInParty(Guid) b1a7e805-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 false And false false false false Normal OnceEver 0 Conversation 11bc67ef-10dc-4b95-b7bf-7bce71f9f883 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 24 1 -1 24 19 true 1 true ShowOnce And PlayFirst 25 25 1 24 And Boolean IsCompanionActiveInParty(Guid) b1a7e804-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 false And false false false false Normal OnceEver 0 Conversation e96bce6c-9216-4637-b8da-0ccbcd6c47d2 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 26 1 -1 26 19 true 1 true ShowOnce And PlayFirst 27 27 1 26 And Boolean IsCompanionActiveInParty(Guid) b1a7e801-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 false And false false false false Normal OnceEver 0 Conversation 0adf53b8-ae07-4bda-93a6-80c0e59b97ff b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 28 1 -1 28 15 true 1 true ShowOnce And Boolean IsPlayerCulture(Culture) TheWhiteThatWends false And false false false false Normal None 0 Conversation 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 29 1 -1 And Boolean IsGlobalValue(String, Operator, Int32) n_Alwah_Freedom EqualTo 2 false And false false false true Normal None 0 Bark 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 b1a8e901-0000-0000-0000-000000000000 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Unassigned -1 -1 Conversation Scene description. SCENE LOCATION SCENE TIME 09a24e97-1f36-44e5-a6ea-3b80f0423242 NPC_Vesgel 9c98d3f5-92f8-4926-9b49-3da82b3aab77 11bc67ef-10dc-4b95-b7bf-7bce71f9f883 e96bce6c-9216-4637-b8da-0ccbcd6c47d2 0adf53b8-ae07-4bda-93a6-80c0e59b97ff